Thursday, April 06, 2006

The Red Gem

The red gem glowing red inside us
Making us go through treachery
For a good cause that is hidden
Which is to enjoy what we can

The treachery is not a test
But a lesson learned in time
Soon to find out that the gem is precious
It is strong with us since the start
But like everything else it will end
The soil of earth shall greet it's box


Hint:
You

3 comments:

thewailer said...

good day emil, I find your stanza and prose befits the imagery I have in mind. Most beautiful piece, hopefully you'd have the time and space to visit some of mine too, do take care and keep up the great work! :)

Oil and Lime said...

Dear Mr.Wailer,
Thank you for the comments I will check you'r poems to soon. I will keep on writing.

kimi azhan said...

Emil,

I think music will add more spices to your entries... Just make sure that the music is aligned to the poem i.e represent the story line as well. Try it out, and we'll give you feedback... okay!

Auntie Kimi