You are my friend in war
Fighting by my side you are my ally
When I fall you pick me up
You stand afront with courage
You have courage there is no denying
Now my friend I would like to ask
Do you have honour?
You kill my harm
Hacking them to death
Neither woman nor child you spare
With a violent rage of anger you slaugther
Killed with out mercy
Is this the soul of a knight?
If this is you I'd rather kill you
We do need an ally my friend
A knight with courage to be our savior
But you have no honour
You are one with the damned my friend
Leave these grounds or burn in hell!
Note: This poem was actually a try at expressing anger. I do not know if this worked so I shall need everyone's opinion. The support you give I shall appriciate with my soul. One more thing, this poem is dedicated to an online game I have been playing for almost a year (RUNESCAPE) you can find this game at www.runescape.com it is a very good game that shall give you an idea of the medieval times. My hopes for my poems are that they be known to the world.
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3 comments:
simplistic, I like it. Thought it was not so much of anger to me, but disgusted by the actions of another.
Emil,
Your anger is not really the highlight of this poem. I must agree with your uncle Joey... sounds like you don't like the principles uphold by the Dark Ally. See, it turns out to still be another beautiful piece!
Auntie Kimi
Oh...... hello I am bitterly sorry for something. I haven't been checking this blog for quite some time not updating it at all. To tell you the truth I was kind off busy with other things. But now I am trying to write more and update this blog more often sorry for my mistake and thank you for the comment yes, I now see that the poem actually expressed that I was disgusted by ones actions.
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