Friday, July 18, 2008

Hello Gaze

Look towards the stars
Tell me what you see my friend
The truth is not there

Do you see like me?
A gift the truth left behind
For humanity


Note: This poem is done in the style of Japanese poetry called Haiku. This style of poetry is quite interesting. For every stanza there are three lines. The first and third line have five syllables while the second has 7 syllables. Go ahead and count the syllables on mine.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Nice to see that you are writing poems again. Its weird how what you write seems to be a part of yourself, a sneak peek to what is in your soul. I know not many would understand, but the complexity of your soul is unique and the way you express is indeed artistic.